#44 - Oh brother where art thou
Oct. 1st, 2010 09:30 pm![[personal profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/user.png)
[[I was away all day bawww so we'll say that Smoke is only finally coherent enough to write in the journal and hasn't read Lin's entry yet /braces for hate. He saw Lotus' entry and immediately went to the park with Aniki in tow and found Amurui, with player permission from both~]]
[the handwriting is chicken-scratchy, reminiscent of Smoke's earliest entries]
Amurui's stuck in some kind of clear cocoon thing. I didn't see what happened.
Aniki and I'll be here in the park until it hatches.
[the handwriting is chicken-scratchy, reminiscent of Smoke's earliest entries]
Amurui's stuck in some kind of clear cocoon thing. I didn't see what happened.
Aniki and I'll be here in the park until it hatches.
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Date: 2010-10-05 11:42 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2010-10-06 03:54 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2010-10-06 04:05 am (UTC)See that doesn't translate well over paper.
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Date: 2010-10-06 06:31 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2010-10-06 06:40 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2010-10-06 07:08 am (UTC)[He's actually better in writing, he's found so far. He has more time to think and formulate his responses. The main obstacle is that speaking his mind over the journals is more dangerous.]
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Date: 2010-10-07 04:50 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2010-10-07 06:07 am (UTC)[He hadn't even thought about it, really...]
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Date: 2010-10-07 04:57 pm (UTC)[written so very slowly]
p a r t i c u l a r n u a n c e s
w r i t t e n c o r r e s p o n d e n c e
I'm getting better, but I ain't that good yet, man.
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Date: 2010-10-11 12:45 am (UTC)...Sorry. Do you... need an explanation?
[He doesn't want to insult Smoke's intelligence, but... does he really need to be told these things?]
Doesn't want to insult his intelligence but makes him say it over the journals. lol Lulu
Date: 2010-10-11 10:11 pm (UTC)[[Can you feel the sarcasm? This is the only time he ever goes 'polite' with his speech]]
lmao. i am. so sorry. he doesn't TRY to be a douchebag, it just happens. ;_;
Date: 2010-10-12 05:43 am (UTC)Nuances. That means the subtleties one can pick up in tone and inflection – how you say something – when speaking face to face.
Written correspondence. Over paper, not spoken in person.
Does that help?
lol I know, it's Lulu XD They just grew up in very different circumstances
Date: 2010-10-12 06:52 am (UTC)Yeah it does. Thanks.
haha, that's good. i just get embarrassed FOR him sometimes.
Date: 2010-10-12 11:19 pm (UTC)